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I just made a major change for a scene early in the film.  For the past few weeks, I keep looking over to what to add or re-write.  So far right up until the second half.  There's only been very minor changes.  I've tweaked the dialogue a bit on a few places and such.  Not many changes though I got rid of a few minor characters.

The big change I've just made involves a song my protagonist was singing.  In the original draft, it was Nirvana's "About a Girl" but I felt as I was reviewing the script that it was too obvious and way too famous.  I was really unsure until just a few minutes ago when I was re-editing my old review of Saved! that I got an idea.  I kept thinking of obscure songs for my character to sing quietly to but in the end.  I went for a personal favorite instead in Massive Attack's "Protection".  Reading the lyrics, I felt the song made more sense to what my character is going through.

I hope to have it done by the end of the month for its official first draft as I don't think there will be many changes unless I decide to do a second draft.

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